Hell, Lindsay IS busty. If she didn't have breasts which should make it impossible to stand, she wouldn't BE Lindsay.
I like this drawing of her, but I feel she should look a little more harmless than she does here. It's what the eyebrows are doing, it gives her a sort of edge, which wasn't present in the blank, numb-minded camper in the show. Besides that, well done, and good with the eyes. The style in TDI is very unique in how it draws eyes - with just irisis, and no pupils. A translation from that often can lower a charcters' personality portrayed, for example, Lindsay would look less dumb, but this works. So, good on you for that.
if you like them now, wait for the bikini versions.
i know i know, fanservice. a lot of people have asked for it and i thought it would be fun. some may be racy and some may cute. actually linds' design is quite difficult so far, but heather, leshawna and izzy's are done.
i think the trick for making them sexy cute toony is not to think of any of those things and run with the characters. like really get into the character. thinking what the character would do in a certain situation, rather than think how would you like to see them.
again, i dunno, how the bikini versions will be seen.
and the other chracters are being worked on, but i dunno which ones should i finish first. actually, heather bikini is finished and i really dig it. she has a mean european model streak going for her in the illo.